Monday, November 01, 2010

Barbara Portrait Comparison Update

I posted this drawing at paintingfriends.com and they gav me a very helpful critique.  As can be seen, the skin tones were lightened, the area between the left eye and ear was widened, as was the neck.  The left eye was corrected so it is looking in the same direction as the right eye.  I'm not happy with the left ear so will correct that.  Overall though this looks much more like Barbara. 

3 comments:

RHCarpenter said...

Well done!

IrinaSztukowski said...

I think you did a great job on this drawing. The face now is glowing from inside. And your are right I would even noticed the eyes if you didn't mention; but yes, they needed to be corrected.
Super work!
Thanks,
Irina

Ann Buckner said...

Thanks Rhonda and Irina. :)

The family/critics and Barbara said it is too dark so another drawing will be done.